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 Small Update for Viola, Act 1 Ability
Shinku Tenshi
 Posted: Jun 4 2018, 11:21 PM
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Character Name: Viola Konishi
Link to Character in archives: http://sengokuhorizon.jcink.net/index.php?...t=0&#entry11974
What section are you changing: Activated Ability 1
What you want it to say: For increased mobility and support in spread fights, I was thinking about adding to her ability slightly. I'll highlight the change in text I had in mind.

"ACTIVATED ABILITY 1: Force Palm (maybe change to Force Blast?)
Viola extends her hand out forcefully, causing a concussive blow to be released from her palm. The blow knocks opponents back up to 3 meters. She must make direct contact and be effectively pushing the opponent or object away for the knockback to occur. She may also kick off of the ground or a sturdy object to propel herself in a linear direction up to 3 meters. This kick cannot be used on opponents like with her hands, and can only be used as a small burst to avoid objects and close gaps between her and her objective. (One turn cooldown.)"

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Nobuyumi
 Posted: Jun 6 2018, 06:58 PM
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Just change it to creating a force blast in general. Though keep in mind, this now means the attack would knock you back all the time. Pretty much how it would work now is that you would have a jet engine in your hand. Yeah shooting it at someone will hurt and push them back but it will also push you back too.

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Shinku Tenshi
 Posted: Jun 8 2018, 12:27 AM
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Ok, how does this sound.

"ACTIVATED ABILITY 1: Force Blast
A white glow surrounds Viola's hand and, upon being unleashed, can emit a forceful blast from her hand to send opponents up to 5 meters from point of use with direct contact. This blast can also be aimed and released around Viola to propel her the same distance in a linear direction to cover ground quickly or avoid attacks. If used against an opponent, Viola will suffer knockback herself, pushing her back up to 3 meters opposite the direction of her opponent."

I'm feeling this may be a bit powerful for an A1, but I'll let you judge that. Just let me know if this sounds good, and I'll edit it on the profile.

Thanks again for looking at this!

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Nobuyumi
 Posted: Jun 8 2018, 08:03 PM
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I like it a lot. However, please remove this part

"Weaker opponents may be dazed after use, with head strikes possibly causing unconsciousness"

Then i will approve it. If it ends up being too OP we can edit it later on.

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Tagami Yumiko
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Shinku Tenshi
 Posted: Jun 15 2018, 03:28 AM
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Took out the part you requested by editing the previous post. Should be in good shape now. http://files.b1.jcink.com/html/emoticons/smile.gif

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 Posted: Jun 25 2018, 02:30 PM
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edit complete

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Azai Nobuyori
The stuck up clan lord who defends the people.

Tagami Yumiko
The adorable poet girl who hates war.

Katayama, Masato
A strategist bent on changing the world.
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